Chocolate Kisses

A sweet scent of caramel lingers

on your breath

and I want to lick the chocolate from

the corner of your mouth.

You smile, sweetly

ignorant of my cravings

and I close my heart.

Opening yet another chocolate bar.

 

Reviews

[Everett DeValle]

Lovely poem...that's how I feel when I eat a reeses peanut butter cup. Sweetly done. :)

[Yheela]

Thank you.
We don't have Reeses here, but I'm a big fan of Snickers. ^_^

[Everett DeValle]

You are so very welcome.

European candy is probably better. :)

[Yheela]

Ha!
I keep hearing that. Friends that have been to the states are not very impressed by the sweets. ^_^

[Everett DeValle]

Yeah, it's probably the high fructose we use on everything instead of using regular cane sugar. :)

[Yheela]

Candy without sugar shouldn't be called candy - "candy like substance" ... ? XD

[Everett DeValle]

I agree. :)

[Heather]

oh I liked this, the double meaning was brilliant in here. Great poem!!

[Yheela]

Thanks, glad you liked it.

[Mia]

This is such a clever poem! Shucks I enjoyed reading it. The ending is fantasic! I must agree with John's comment 100%...haha

[Yheela]

Thank you ever so much!

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Wow so sad. How can you get close enough to smell his breath yet not give him the message you want him? Ok he's a little dense but maybe he thought you needed chocolate; we all do lol

[Yheela]

Good thing we can get nearly the same kick eating chocolate, when not getting any love I mean. ^_^