tiny tiny tiny

powdered glass
that's what it feels like
veins pulsating
like red strands of neon
dipped in deadly glitter

your eyes burn my neck
and I wish I had the strength to go

carbonic acid burning my throat
shaping reality
glimpses of others
tiny tiny tiny
bubbles distorting

without a word, you take my hand
and I fall for you, head over heels

bubbling acid
glittering glass
blissful madness


it doesn't matter baby
I didn't want to live forever

Reviews

[Dr. Wood ?]

sounds as if you are falling uncontrollably in love to me..a great poem..as usual

[Yheela]

Thank you! ^_^

[Claire Twinn]

Sounds deadly, hypnotic and enticing- a doomed love affair perhaps? Wonderful and unusual imagery here.

[Yheela]

Thanks, it's really inspired by a happy love story. I just twisted it into something new.