My Life

My Life

A Poem by Vicky Zhuang Yi-Yin
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what's life like...

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I explode like a volcano
For reasons I don’t know
My life is a mess
Void of all happiness

I scream like a banshee
Hurting those dear to me
My life is empty
But full of misery

I squeal in pain
For all my unworthy strain
My life has no achievements
It just gives me punishments

I shout for a friend
Hoping he’ll be with me till the end
But my life has no one but foes
Those foes who laugh at my woes

© 2010 Vicky Zhuang Yi-Yin


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. sometimes ... isolation ... mental or physical or both ... causes us extreme pain ... you express the intensity really well ... at such times ... i find it helpful to do different things ... time can always be filled in new ways ...

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Vicky Zhuang Yi-Yin
Vicky Zhuang Yi-Yin

Lahore, Pakistan



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I'm an amateur writer, who enjoys to write a lot. I almost write anything that comes to my mind, or what I am asked to write. My genres range from fantasy fiction to journal blogs and poetry to haiku... more..