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A Poem by Vicky Zhuang Yi-Yin

Red and warm liquid
Flow like river on skin
Waiting for the end

© 2010 Vicky Zhuang Yi-Yin


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Hello Vicky,

Pitter patter on the floor as sudden chill washes over me. Everything starts to dim, and feel myself fade. tired...so so tired. Pitter patter....pitter patter...pitter patter....the lights are out.....and a breath escapes my lips as I swim in a pool of red.

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Matthew

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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Hello Vicky,

Pitter patter on the floor as sudden chill washes over me. Everything starts to dim, and feel myself fade. tired...so so tired. Pitter patter....pitter patter...pitter patter....the lights are out.....and a breath escapes my lips as I swim in a pool of red.

Regards,

Matthew

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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 Added on August 30, 2010
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Vicky Zhuang Yi-Yin
Vicky Zhuang Yi-Yin

Lahore, Pakistan



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I'm an amateur writer, who enjoys to write a lot. I almost write anything that comes to my mind, or what I am asked to write. My genres range from fantasy fiction to journal blogs and poetry to haiku... more..