Just a Thought

Freestyle poem

Life

Death

Life

Death

Breath

Breathe

Cease

Let go

Open up

Life

Death

Life 

Death

Air

Fire

Aspire 

Enlighten

Live

Live

Live

Close casket 

And his or her tombstone said??? 

Author's Note

Just a thought about life

Reviews

[Eleanor]

Okay so this is amazing!
You explained the truth! People live. They die. Life goes on.
There are obstacles and sometimes its too much. But we just have to breathe and release. We have to stay strong and move on.
We have to live because there's no other choice. After all we have to end up in our own destined grave. People stay in sorrow after someone's death, but soon everyone's forgotten. We all remain forgotten and untold stories. But this cannot stop us from living.
I don't know what I said even make sense. But I really liked this :)
Thank you!

[cristamay76]

This is a beautiful depiction of life and death

[A Scribbler Named Bek]

Whoa. So one of the classes I'm taking this semester is trying to answer the question of the meaning of life using ancient western literature and I've noticed a common theme that most civilizations believed immortality - of the name not necessarily the physical person - was uber important. This made me think of that: like, you've lived so now what? What do you have to show for it?
Good job :)

[Alex Boyd]

Thanks something I'm going though right now trying to answer that question myself lo.