Truthfully
A Poem by
Viki Rachel
This is a poem I wrote to a loved one to express my feeling of adoration towards them.
Words are useless,
Unless they're true.
And,
Really?
Truthfully?
Honestly?
I love you.
© 2010 Viki Rachel
Author's Note
As always, open for any negative or postitive comments.
What do you think? Honest opinons, please.
Reviews
Short and straight to the point. It's a powerful poem, and very well written. "Words are useless unless they're true." Such a truthful line, amazing.
Posted 15 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
Short sweet and to the point, loved how it came out to the I Love You at the end. For me, it built some tension in after 'And.' Keep up the good work!
Posted 15 Years Ago
Short sweet and to the point, loved how it came out to the I Love You at the end. For me, it built some tension in after 'And.' Keep up the good work!
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
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Added on July 15, 2010
Last Updated on July 15, 2010
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Viki Rachel Dallas, TX
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