“Pain”

Last poem from my Virtual Poem Gallery; open to interpretation ;) Tags I used in tumblr:#Poetry #CreativeWriting #Art #Imagination #Feelings #Creativity #Thoughts #Words #Poems #Passion #Writing

Adieu adieu

It could not come true

We could have been happy

It was nugatory

For an interference too strong

Made everything planned go wrong

To struggle against it would require sophistry

I do not possess unfortunately

Farewell love

I could not go beyond and above

For us

Author's Note

Amateur writer, please give me constructive criticism! Thank you and God bless you! <3

Reviews

[Just Kim]

Well i am not that good at criticism, But I know a good flowing write when I see one,
I enjoyed this