Cry

A short poem I made when I was lonely..

 

Sometimes I just want to cry

To let this tears fall by

To let my feelings fly

To set them real high

 

Emotions that keeps on holding

All the smiles and laughs I've been keeping

All I want is to be strong

Teach me how to keep going on

 

I can tell my heart's been hurt

Save me from this filthy dirt

Eyes that was clear was now a blur

You didn't even notice, you're insecure

 

Reviews

[Bailey C. Writing]

To let this tears fall by
*These? This line threw me off a bit :p
But this poem had deep meaning, and it was a very nice write. I can relate. Sometimes it's tough trying to keep being strong, and being hurt is never easy to go through. Good job

[thelazyelephant]

:)

[stars are far]

this is so sweet
i loved that :)

[Tasha]

This was beautiful and totally relatable.
♥ Ta'Shandra

[Dreamer]

the only thing i should tell you is that i would suggest you change "this tears" to "these tears" Other than that nice piece:) can u please send me a msg explaining the last line. thanks!!

[Light and ashes]

A really beautiful and sincere poem.

[Ripple of Aqua]

Like a music piece. Nothing better comes to mind. It's too perfect.

[Daytonight]

I am so in this spot right now! I can feel the depth to these words. They are penning what my heart is feeling. Well done.

[Raven Starhawk]

A richly artistic piece composed with raw emotions that anyone can feel and perhaps express. I liked this.

[Victoria PoetryBunny]

hmm quite a great poem, nice simple picture for it and title, nice simple lines, yet got the emotions and feelings written great, i liked this :)