Boundless

I wrote this poem at 11:45 p.m. I say it's pretty good. I mean, I usually write better at night so~ Enjoy~

Clouds so soft and white

Above a navy night sparkling like rainbows

I see him, walking this way and that

He no longer needs to wander endlessly

But he fails to notice that

Crystals and water coat the both of us

Matching, as we always had

Once again, we have the chance,

The chance to reset ourselves

But how do we begin?

A step, and one more. Another and another.

I float like a breeze, warm and soothing

Reminiscence of my existence rushes to my center

Pulsing, racing faster

And soon I merge into the wind

Lines crossed, barriers shattered

Clouds and stars beamed wondrously

He sees me with an unmasked tenderness

The clouds nourish below me

As we envelop into a boundless embrace

Author's Note

Hope you enjoyed~! Thank you~

Reviews

[Takeshi Yamada]

Yurie Lee, lovely poem. Two parts that I especially liked:

1) I like the last few lines of the first stanza. It's interesting that the poet is watching the young man and seems to know they are together, but the young man is not aware yet or used to it, so he still wanders around endlessly. Very nice image of a young love.

2) Your word usage is very nice throughout. It gave me a clear image of their world...despite being night, it feels like there's not an ounce of darkness there.

[Yurie Lee]

Awww, thank you so much~! Your insight on this poem is very interesting, and it makes me feel amazing to know someone enjoyed this poem~ :D

[GalaxyGhost]

Beautiful! It reminds me of a peaceful night with a gentle breeze--picturesque!