The Night Shows the Darkness

The night shows the darkness

Coming from your emptiness

All of your suffering

Your body left filling.

Too little to drain.

You seek the cure

Lurking within your brain.

Confession with a stir.

It is all but a blur

Skinned of all your fur.

Left to die

Not even a sigh.

From the gate.

Your tight secured fate.

Reviews

[Zachary_James]

Amazing job with the word useage i loved it, great job Zeke

[Hamza]

stumpy yet meaningful ..
immaculate thoughts .. :)

[zainul]

Great write.
Concise and meaningful.

[Kris Zee]

Is it about death?
Either I'm obsessed with the theme of death, or this just describes so well what death would be like.
I love the darkness :)

[Zeke]

Yes it is about death. I wasn't feeling the best that day and writing helps calm me down and words and everything just comes to me.

[Kris Zee]

I know what you mean :)