Paint

I want to paint
my life a fresh coat
of the very cool
gray
you like so much

When I finish
you are welcome,
I invite you  
to watch
me dry

So you can
tell me whether
I may have
overlooked
and missed a spot

Reviews

[Phoen-ix]

I love the first stanza.."I want to paint my life a fresh coat of the very cool gray you like so much.."
It starts off incredibly strong. Although short, your message was beautifully conveyed. Well done.

[ZackOfBridge]

Thank you for reading Phoen-ix, much appreciated :)

[Sami Khalil]

"I want to paint
my life a fresh coat
of the very cool
gray
you like so much"

[Sami Khalil]

Wonderful paint and painting of words. Bravo......................

[ZackOfBridge]

Hey thanks a lot man, I'll have to check out some of your work.

[Sami Khalil]

No problem. You are welcome...:)..................