Dear Son,

The pain of a miscarriage

Dear son,

I constantly think about the man you could have been

Some nights I can't sleep cause I wonder what our life could have been 

Many nights I stay up and just cry because I miss you 

I have dreams where you're here and everything is perfectly fine

I won't ever to be able to get over you 

But maybe you won't be on my mind in due time

When I heard that I lost you I was never the same 

Your life itself was a blessing

First traumatic experience and it makes me feel insane 

You changed my ways and that's a blessing 

I can just imagine this picture,

Dark skin brown eyes sweet smile with a bright future

Everyone would be so happy if you were here 

You would have brought your mom and I together 

Even though you aren't here,

You'll always be in my heart forever

Love,

Dad

Reviews

[Najam Us Saher]

Deeply moved to read this. You poured your emotions really well.

[Dhara_Ditzy Kat]

A life that was a blessing in itself, however fleeting and brief it was. Zayir, your words tell me that a journey can be momentous yet love is eternal. I could feel with you, reflect on his life with you!

[Zayir]

The loss of a loved one is a universal feeling most can relate to. This is one aspect. Love is powerful and everlasting. Loved ones enhance our life but can also make the world feel empty without them. I'm glad you were able to take a little trip through my mind. Be careful, my mind has been compared to rabbit hole. Thank you for your review and taking your time to read my work (I always have to say it no matter how many times we review each others work)

Much Love

[Dhara_Ditzy Kat]

It’s wonderful to have friends who value our presence and support. And yes I’ll be careful with the rabbit hole. A very interesting analogy, I must say. You’re welcome always.

[R]

Your pain is well articulated. Excellent work.

[Zayir]

Thank You!
Much love

[Chris Shaw]

You often read about the pain a mother has on losing a child through miscarriage, but this is the first time I have read about it from the perspective of a Dad. You did this well and conveyed real emotion. It got through to this reader.

Well done

Chris

[Zayir]

Definitely had a hard time writing this. Thank you so much for the review I really appreciate it
read moreDefinitely had a hard time writing this. Thank you so much for the review I really appreciate it
Much Love

[Aaron]

beautifully written loved it

[Zayir]

Thank you!
Much Love