Your Beauty Amazed Me

Stunning beauty of the beloved

Oh! The moment you appeared,

Before the eyes of mine,

Blown away I was,

By the beauty that you carried.

 

I kept on looking at you,

Your eyes, hair, lips and didn’t pay heed,

To the single word of yours,

You walked in beauty, it’s true.

 

As the river waits to receive the fountain,

And the river’s craving to hold the ocean close,

Such was my feeling for thee,

Why are you trying to bind love then?

 

Isn’t ‘Singularity’ a mirage in the end?

Let my heart with yours one mingle,

Stop acting like that earthy worm,

Earthy, callous and blind. 

 

To you, ‘grace’ should be another name given,

If love is foolishness then let me be a fool,

Let me love you and your loveliness for ever and ever,

Seeing thy beauty ashamed shall feel Aphrodite and Helen.   

Reviews

[Blake Fodor]

You have gone through a very careful process of putting this together. The content is moving and clear, emotional and personal. The form is solid and concise. I tip my hat to you !

[AprilRN1210]

Sometimes we don't see the beauty that other's see.. We feel beautiful when we see ourselves in our lover's eyes.. This is a sweet, romantic plea to a humble heart- of wanting to show her the beauty that she possesses and share that deep, undying love with her for a lifetime... nicely written..

[Mauricio Montoya]

yes a touch of beauty, nice work.

[Md. Ziaul Haque]

Thank you so much.

[raj24]

its like a song..enjoyed reading this soft romantic poem...a guys way of appreciating his love..loved it..beautiful ..thanks for sharing :)

Raj

[Md. Ziaul Haque]

Thanks a lot my friend.