My First Love

First love

I was in class five,

When I fell in love with a girl,

So beautiful she was, so charming,

I would just look at her and in the dreamy world dive.

 

Something was hypnotic about her,

That kept me dragging,

But the villains had their presence too and kept trying,

To stop me from winning her heart and being the winner.

 

Perhaps she knew about my feelings for her,

Perhaps not,

Yet so happy I was to attend the classes to see her once,

Honestly speaking, no matter how enjoyable or boring the classes were!

 

Each night I would be Hamlet and like Macbeth would decide,

That the next day I would talk to her,

Even though I didn’t have anything important to say,

Still I wanted to listen to her voice aside.

 

As is seen in films the giant-like villain appeared,

Threatening me to avoid her from then on,

Very thin I was but not a coward,

I hit him, his left eye changed colour and turned red!

Reviews

[Cryingkate]

I'd love to hear more of the story and was left wondering how things turned out.
I guess if she was your first then there must of been more after and therefore it didn't work out as a lifetime partner.
But did you ever get to date her? Did she ever find out your feelings toward her?

[Md. Ziaul Haque]

Thank you so much for your review. Well, I used to look at her since she was stunningly beautiful. As I was quite shy, I didn't talk to her much. Yet, I was rather certain that she could feel my love for her. After a few months, she shifted to a new place far away since her father's job was based on frequent transfers. You can call it a sort of crush. :)