You are Beauty

I won’t say that you are beautiful,

Because it shall show my disrespect,

If I do so truly, it’s a fact,

 I won’t say that I don’t miss you, it’s not cool.

 

I won’t call you a rose,

Since you are more than that,

And the prosaic smoothness of the silk will scat,  

Sensing your softness that God for you especially chose.

 

I keep Keats’ notion in mind, my cutie,

You are not beautiful, you are beauty.

Reviews

[Jen]

And that's why Keats said : "A thing of beauty is a joy for ever:
Its lovliness increases; it will never
Pass into nothingness..."
Apart from that, your notion about beauty i.e. "it's not beautiful, it's beauty" confuses me!
Beauty is a characteristic of a person, idea or a thing. Are you trying to delineate that a young woman trying to appear mature or an older woman trying to appear younger would not be considered beautiful???
I love the first stanza and the two last strong lines as well

[Md. Ziaul Haque]

By the line "You are not beautiful, you are beauty", the lover endeavours to portray the stunning beauty of the beloved. He is so spellbound by her matchless beauty that he cannot help making this comment. He has uttered the aforementioned words to lay more emphasis on her beauty. :)

[Jen]

Oh, Okay! I now understand it well and Thank You