Separation is Bliss Sometimes

Separation is not ever hellish,

It can be bliss,

A must for a relationship to grow,

Lets the restless souls glow.

 

Aren’t the pillars away from each other?

And the strings of a guitar,

Space should there be in between,

For harmony, for a better tune.

 

Being fleetingly apart like Radha-Krishna purifies the heart,

Makes us feel each other more, advises us never to part.

Reviews

[Zahra]

Sometimes even relations need some space to grow. well penned.

[Alfred Kukitz]

The separation eventually means the coming together so the heart strings play a melody. Nice write!

[Draven]

Eternal separation can be bliss if it is for the best. As for temporary, I always said that "distance makes the heart grow fonder while breaking it in the process".


I like the way you wrote this. I like the way you are really subtle and persuasive with ur point and how u describe it with such ease and simplicity.