Zoe,
Wow... I send much time making love to words, so when I find a castle like this, I am all about its bones and structure, and design, that I have to pull up hard and say "you fool," and stop because, some things are sufficient in their beauty and all I can do is hope when my eyes caress their way down the lines that I miss none of it...
This is my "poem of the day, the week, too for that matter... hell the whole month.
Vol
Posted 2 Months Ago
2 Months Ago
I cried a little when I read this. You are so very kind to me. And you are anything but a fool!
Zoe.
Aw, sort of like me when I read your poem...There are a million folks writing bad verse,.. read moreZoe.
Aw, sort of like me when I read your poem...There are a million folks writing bad verse, but very few poets. When I was teaching High School creative writing, I had many students who could draw and wanted to be artists, I'd ask," Who's your favorite artist?" Blank stare, except for one who was already selling still lifes for three hundred bucks... he did stunning work and his favorite artist was Monet. Many of the others wanted to be Rock Guitarists. Jacob was NEVER without his guitar, hitting Rock and Blues licks, his favorite guitarists were Mike Bloomfield, Clapton, and Santana. In my Rock-n-roll history going back to the mid-sixties, I have never been rocked like he and his friends rocked me... Poetry is easy to understand, Whatever it says to you this time is what it means this time. There are no wrong answers.
Being a competent wordsmith poet requires a gift first of all, a talent, a vocabulary, and more than a few little gray cells that know how to see the world with one raised eyebrow and paint it in words. Someone like you...
Vol
2 Months Ago
Poetry is the art of saying that for which there are no words. You must a gift, otherwise you are ju.. read morePoetry is the art of saying that for which there are no words. You must a gift, otherwise you are just a Vogon inflicting literary pain on others. I don't say that to slight other writers. Poetry i very beneficial when expressing your feelings and dealing with mental health issues. But to truly be a poet you must have a tortured soul. I applaud you for being a teacher. It must have been fulfilling work. And thank you for believing I meet the requirements to be a poet!
2 Months Ago
Zoe,
Teaching was torture enough without dragging my soul along for the ride... AND I.. read more
Zoe,
Teaching was torture enough without dragging my soul along for the ride... AND I've been at it long enough to know one when I see one... You are a pleasure to read...
Vol
There are loves that never lose hope. This sounds like one such. Best of luck, but be careful.
Posted 2 Months Ago
2 Months Ago
I wrote this for my youngest daughter. I am doing my best not to run after her and throw love at her.. read moreI wrote this for my youngest daughter. I am doing my best not to run after her and throw love at her she doesn't want right now. But a mother is always a mother and the ache remains.
This just reads beautifully, and maybe it’s the content that helps with that because the theme of always holding out hope for someone is a nice sentiment. I just keeping going back and rereading parts of it.
Posted 2 Months Ago
2 Months Ago
Thank you! I hope you find hope in the idea that someone would have that kind of love for you.
This is Fabulous Zoe, it reminds me of some of Ezra Pound's more lyrical moments. Exceptional ✨️✨️✨️✨️✨️
Posted 2 Months Ago
2 Months Ago
Oh my! That is indeed a compliment. I tend to hold my poems in the shadows, like a nervous stage mot.. read moreOh my! That is indeed a compliment. I tend to hold my poems in the shadows, like a nervous stage mother anxious for her protegee to achieve perfection. Your words give me courage to perhaps be a little more free!