My Tranquility (A Lune Haiku)

My tranquility?
I found it
Amidst the chaos....

Reviews

[WhiteWillow]

This is lovely, and could be my life story! Well told.

[Rayne Stanton]

love it, and even in its shortness it still captures the tranquility.

[Katannaism]

This is beautiful. The emotion is well juxtaposed, the poetry is poignant and exquisite. This short piece just spoke volumes. And very peaceful.

[Poeticadia]

Hmmm i've been there a few times too! When it all gets too much, sometimes you just have to let it flow over you and take time out.

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poignant and lovely :)
(beautiful!!)

[Laughing-Bear]

Tranquil, adjective, free from disturbance; calm! This poem made me smile. It reminds me of the serenity I feel when watching the Northern Lights from a dog sled while the world around me is going nuts. Well written!

[Coyote Poetry]

Tranquility is rare to find. I like the vision you create with the eight words. A excellent poem.
Coyote

[John Jackson (El Juero)]

Very nice. I can see this.