Message to the Exiler

It was just a short poem.. but so meaningful for me..

Run , run as fast as you can .

All day long you were the one ,

running in my mind

I cannot eat

I cannot sleep

I cannot think  anymore!!!

Wishing you'd fall by my side

So I look up the vast skies

wishing you were here

and I'd lie amidst my pillows

wishing you were near

come back soon

My beloved exiled one ..

Author's Note

It was a sudden rush of thoughts and feelings .. not that good but hope you appreciate it..

Reviews

[Mockingbird]

exiled implies permanence and it's sad that there may be a possibility that you won't see each other again. great job. ang galing.

[FelicityAllona]

......hahahaha..

great job jha!

[Manpreet]

Nice work! A complete moment captured in these lines beautifully!