My saviour

My heart ferociously weeps as I fall to my knees,
About to give up,
Take my last breath;
but then I look up.
To see thee,
My saviour,
My love.

Reviews

[J. Write]

Simple and yet full of emotion. I love it. Thank you for sharing.

[Zoelouise]

Thank you for reading

[Dark Butterfly]

i love it! emotional, inspireing, full of heart! good job!
100/100
:)

[Zoelouise]

Thanks for taking the time to review :)