My fix

My stomach in my mouth as the clock ticks, Needing and wanting for my fix,
Loving and hating at the same time,
All that I want is to make you mine,
It is not that I need you or that I am alone
I am just lost and you're my way home.

Reviews

[DrD]

Clever and compelling word useage with a very sensitive, appealin conclusion. I like your style and choice of theme. I will be visiting you more often because this is another of your work that I enjoyed thoroughly. I would have preferred that line 2 was structured as "Needing and waiting for my fix" because that would justify the "for" word which seems out of place as "needing for."

[Zoelouise]

Thank you I agree the poem would have a much better flow with line 2 as 'needing and waiting for my fix' it makes a huge difference.