Love is Death and Death is You

Rain, Rain go away because of you my pain will stay.With people's innocence always mocking me making me transparent and illnatured to everyone but him. Being a merchant of love gave me what i needed when i pleaded for salvation. With him being perfect at being imperfect gave me a different kind of love. But love is death and death is you. Its pain stains like a black tattoo. Those memories come back again and blind me in the ropes of pain. Crimson blood streams down my head like a long silk ribbon, tied by a thread to a hole in my skull. Now just a memory thats faded and dull.

Reviews

[MrOldFashioned]

interesting.

[Coyote Poetry]

Wow. Straight and direct poetry. Could expand poem to good story. I like the statements and the feel/desire of the words.
"Those memories come back again and blind me in the ropes of pain."
No weakness in the excellent poem.
Coyote

[xSamilynnx]

really good!!!! y didnt u tell me u wrote!?!?!? dude!!!