haiku

A Poem by wizardlypoet8

My first haiku

Red leaves fall gently

fluttering across the sky

creating visions

© 2015 wizardlypoet8

Author's Note

I'm not sure if I did the syllables correctly...? But this is my first haiku. I want to learn more about real forms of poetry, so let me know if I am doing this correctly! Also, the photograph was taken by me. I love photography as well.

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Chris

5 - 7 - 5, nature themed... and meaning full. Read well and left thoughts in its wake.

Posted 10 Years Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Bobbo600

I really liked the poem and great picture to go with it. Its not quite a traditional haiku tho' The first and last lines of a Haiku have 5 syllables and the middle line has 7 syllables.

Posted 10 Years Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

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Added on December 2, 2015
Last Updated on December 2, 2015

Author

wizardlypoet8

Tulsa, OK

About

Hi! My name is Zoie and I am 16. I am an avid poetry reader, and I plan to become a Child Psychologist. My own mental illness has sparked my curiosity about psychology, and I want to make the lives .. more..