Sentiment

poem

I know a girl who saves 

her dead orchid blooms

in a drawer in her vanity.

I called her sentimental

and she laughed, saying,

"I'm fucked in the head is

all."

Reviews

[MCS]

Love it, we need more straightforwardness like this.

[.]

This is so simple and great! Every line is perfectly harmonized with perfect chosen words. This is brilliant. 100 for me!

[redd Brick Keshner]

Funny how what we deem normal can vary from person to person and situation to situation. 🙏🏻🕊

[Perry]

Hi, Keshner. My daughter was the inspiration for this short poem. Once, when I was working at an ice cream bar, a mother ordered a chocolate cone for her two-year-old daughter. I handed the girl her cone and she said, "It looks like s**t, but it isn't."

[redd Brick Keshner]

Oh, classic!