BLOSSOM

In the rains and the rays;
I shall bloom and grow
like a blossom;
Delicate to touch,
vulnerable to the winds;
But shielded by what I endured.

Reviews

[Kathy Van Kurin]

"Blossom"
zubia,
The strength which comes through wind, rain and storm is
where the tough outer protective shell is formed. It is not
always beautiful when seen in a plant but we as human
beings carrying a soul within our multi-layers are capable
of this beautiful help of strength. Perseverance and maturity
do go hand in hand I think. Hence:
"But shielded by what endured.
This little poem is right to the point.
Blessings,
Kathy

[wordman]

sounds a lot like life as we bloom and grow

[barleygirl]

Gracefully poetic just like a flower fluttering in the spring breeze! I love your analogy, comparing the resilience of a flower to one's own vulnerable self! (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie

[zubia]

I'm happy that you liked it!
Thankyou. :))

[BlackPrince]

'But shielded by what I endured'.
This shows that our past experiences, negative or positive, can be life lessons strengthening us in our present daily survival.

This is a short and nice poem which is very meaningful.

WELL DONE!!!

[zubia]

Thankyou for this great review! :))