Poem Battle #6

in which K is hyper

K- I tried to write a start

to a sonnet that would win,

but I can't focus 'cause my heart

feels like its pumping heroin

 

Z- you need to calm down

or you'll end up alone,

and all the love that you own

will be in the quilts that you've sown

 

K- I really hate you sometimes,

because you're super wrong,

I know that love's hard to find

but I don't care 'cause you're a jerk

 

Z- I can't believe you just committed the crime,

of writing four lines without a proper rhyme

Author's Note

Let us know who you think won!
(I'm so sorry for this one, I shouldn't write after having coffee) -K

Reviews

[Nami Machae]

i find this kinda funny (Z won by the way) and I really liked it :) Though I disagree with the four lines without a rhyme think, but i laughed anyway XD keep it up!!