Poem Battle #7

we may have gone a bit meta

Z- This place we'll not revisit

Today we'll not redo

so remember how exquisite

and unique this is to you

 

K- Indevidual,

an oft' misspoken word

Irredeemable,

labels; great, absurd

 

Z- like flames what we burn,

cannot be unconsumed

We have but one chance to learn,

life's lessons or be doomed

 

K- seconds pass impartially,

each one a lost reality

Author's Note

As always, let us know who's parts you liked better!
-K