Poem Battle #8

a description of a country murder

K- Boom, the blast of a rifle

Crack, the shedding of brass

Boom, the sound barely stifled

Crack, not a second passed

 

Z- run from the smoking barrel

barrel through the open land

land in safetly from the feral

who will kill you by his hand

 

K- A merry chase, a game

the laughter, something dark

a chance for breath, what blame

can be laid on twisted heart?

 

Z- Not even a heart amiss can hide

the blane of a murder tried

Author's Note

So who wrote better?
-K