Poem Battle #12

K- "What if?" thoughts that echo

those words that haunt,

"What if?" the weed set to grow

your failures, laugh and taunt

 

Z- insecurity has plowed your mind,

and this doubt was planted,

if given sustenance and time,

it will grow to become unwanted

 

K- Mistakes of times far gone

and regrets that bind the dreams,

too afraid to write the song

that sets forgivness free

 

Z- after many years of teh song unsung,'

'forementioned falcon was found in the tree, beaten and hung

Author's Note

And on that note, who wrote it better?
-K