Secrets

                                                    SECRETS 

People say the more we tell, the better we feel. Sadness gets reduced after telling things to people. 

It might as well be true, just not for me........

The real me is deeper

The real me is mature

The real me begs to come out 

Im just not ready for the tour

The real me curses me

The real me is pure

The real me loves everything

Im just not that sure

The real me seeks wisdom

The real me cries alone

The real me is true

A diamond waiting to be shown

The real me reflects

The real me never surfaces

This is the real me- a secret to this world

TAAADDAAA..........:)

Author's Note

there u go.........another piece out of boredome...........

Reviews

[Dev]

Goody Good.. I liked the expression and the thought behind it.. Just the line "The real me curses me" has one too many Me's in it.. remove one.. Rest flow is great ! :D

[Tapsi]

AHEM....so since when have you started actually writing poems???? i thought "it is a waste of time and only stupid people like me indulge in such things "
anyway, the thing is ....its fantabulous :)

[cortana112]

so true and relatable, well written. loved it!

[Thomas Fleet]

It's great. :}
I thought it was well structured, and just an overall beautiful poem.
You're a good writer...so don't stop.