Tired Friday

Today is Friday. I feel to write what my mouth can't tell.

I'm just tired. 

I couldn't breathe as it was. 

I look for greener pastures.

I wish for better creations.

But no one's there to risk.

So I go alone instead.

And walked away without a blink.

It somehow gives me chills and hopes.

Where no one is designed to break me.

Where no one laughs at me,

Where no one will hurt me.

Where no one wishes to find me. 

I'm all alone, done risking.

Author's Note

You can tell me your opinions. No hate, for me this is freedom so go ahead.

Thank you.

Reviews

[Phill Oz O'fee]

Sometimes it is good to be alone! When you are around too many distractions, you can lose yourself. You can forget about your soul. You can forget about your heart. You can forget about your mind. Overall, you can forget about you. Nice write my friend...keep up the poetic expressions... :-)

[Ali]

Thank you, this review means a lot to me. I'll keep that in mind! Thank you!!

[Gabby The Gab]

To be alone is to be strong, and to be strong is to feel what it's like to be alone. Great write! :)

[emmajoy]

This poem is you, you from somewhere deep inside and so finely said, so sincere. What you say is true as true, being alone is - more often or not, a good thing, it's time to feel yourself, yes, FEEl yourself - as if looking into a mirror and whispering, 'This is who I am, and, I''m fine, can go anywhere my thoughts take me'!

This is a lovely piece of writing.. please write and post more, Ali.

[Ali]

Yes, I will. Thank you!!!!

[Unspoken poet]

I like being alone, it's nice at times, this is really good

[Ali]

Hello, thank you for being this appreciative.