water

"like water i tried to contain you. like water you rippled in my palms, and like water you drained through the cracks between my fingers. i guess love isn't like water. and i was trying to drain the sea in the process of falling for you."

Reviews

[Anjali]

Wow..... I liked this poem, very much. Keep writing!

[Sonakshi Arora]

Minimalistic poems are the best! Great job

[Najam Us Saher]

What an amazing poem. I liked the similie you used for narrating the poem. Amazing.