Her view

She can see the red light flashing
from her window
when she watches the trains come through
she said her view is better
 in the winter
when the trees aren't in bloom

Reviews

[Brad Dehler]

Mackenzi Drew me in. I like the stark placement and descriptions, i can see it now

[mackenzi_drew]

Thanks. I'm glad that you enjoyed reading my little poem. It is sort of a quote that my Grandma said one day when I was visiting her. :)