War

Everyday is a battle for me,

Every wound only bleeds.

I'm tired of this world,

I'm loosing the war.

I walk on a endless rope,

And when I fall I lose my hope.

I'm tired of this world,

I'm loosing the war.

No one never seem to care,

The ones I loved are gone, and its not fair.

I'm tired of this world,

I'm loosing the war.

There's so much time cannot erase,

I don't want to be in this awful race.

I'm tired of this world,

I'm loosing the war.

Hatred is all I feel,

My broken heart cannot heal, the pain is just to real.

I'm tired of this world,

I'm loosing the war.

No one ever saw the signs,

Here's my last "Goodbye"

I died in this world,

I have been defeated in the war.

Reviews

[Beautiful_lady]

I've read this one and I like it as always

[Jerryyoung1z]

Wow, the emotions in this are really raw. About a lone soul who feels abandoned and not cared about and exhausted for having to fight this never ending war that is life. I love your use of repetition, and your imagery is lovely. Nice job.