Did you know that?

Another Poem...dark and painful. It's about self harm. Written on November 26th, 2009.

I'm a failure

Did you know that?

 

I'm a freak

Did you know that?

 

You control me

Did you know that?

 

I'm loosing it

Did you know that?

 

I hate you

DId you know that?

 

I love you

Did you know that?

 

I'm dying inside

Did you know that?

 

..Because of you

Did you know that?

 

You shattered my already black, broken heart

Did you know that?

 

You didn't know.

You didn't know,

Or maybe you did but never cared..

Reviews

[TheFemininePad]

Very powerful and emotional. You are stressing your emotions that you feel about someone you loved. I can tell that they didn't really love you from the way your poem sounds. It must have been a really bad break up. You wrote this very well, and I enjoyed reading it.

[MaggieSummers]

The repetition drives home the message of despair. Deeply emotional write.

[Allen Smuckler]

A Broken Beauty.
A very poignant and heartfelt write...
you should feel proud.
Allen

[E.V. Black]

God, this was so...everything. I can't even begin to describe how it felt to me. Maybe it already has everything one needs to know inside of it. This poem just made me sad and melancholy inside. It weighs down the heart and makes one feels as if there is no hope in the world.
I hope that you are able to find hope somewhere. Excellent piece.

[Julz]

I love this, really emotional and powerful words

[..]

extremely emotional. you express yourself quite well