Self observation

self observation in another life i have been a sea turtle grown up without a mother never been taught by anyone and yet in the end i have made my way in the ocean

in another life i have been a sea turtle
grown up without a mother
never been taught by anyone
and yet in the end
i have made my way in the ocean

Reviews

[StorySmithy]

I quite enjoyed reading this! Succinct and powerful.

[a_methyste]

Thank you a lot for reading it and for the feedback. I appreciate it. Have a beautiful day.

[Jibey]

We are what we are... and sometimes we cannot stop ourselves

[a_methyste]

Yes indeed. Sometimes we can interfere and on some other aspects there is nothing you can do.

[John the Baptist]

Though the poem refers to another life, I think it may reflect in some way the speaker's own experience. What lies behind these word is unknowable, but I feel the speaker may have known some difficult times.

[a_methyste]

It is about rotating in this cosmos as a gadget, human vehicle, how we process genetic information by birth.