I luv u

You are so handsome boy
What rucks and sacks
Do I use now
To chase the girls away
And keep you all for me.

Please do not run away.

Reviews

[Jibey]

'rucks and sacks'... stimulating words --- a means of containing.... resonates with 'ruts and sucks'

[a_methyste]

I like what you added, I am making another version with what you added cute Jibey, :) I like the way it sounds.

[Arundass TP]

Hmmm. Good poem. Enjoyed reading 👍

[a_methyste]

Thank you Arundas.