Creating poetry

Confessions on water,
Like drawings sculpted in cave.
Like the hair of the girl entangled on the lovers hand
Ribs of the running deer,
Caught on the dearest tree of the forest.
Memory out of lust!

Reviews

[jacob erin-cilberto]

I am quite taken by the images in this piece.
Conjures up a piece of art that has so many more elements with each look.
j.

[a_methyste]

Thank you a lot. I appreiate that.

[Poetic Beauty]

There are many different things that spark our imagination and get the energy going for creating poetry. Random tiny things

[a_methyste]

Yes I love those random tiny things. :)

[Poetic Beauty]

Me as well

[Twilight]

Our actual sources of inspiration can be random themselves, so it's not just components of content which this trait is applicable to. I believe that it also adds an element of surprise, in our writing; when we introduce what seems to be "random" for one's readership.

[a_methyste]

Yes indeed.