Gloomy

It is gloomy in the city
smoke in this bar
I am sitting here alone
with no place to go
nothing to do
no friends to call

just waiting for hours to pass
sipping coffee here and then
and smoking a cigarette.

Reviews

[Buddhistboy73]

Gloomy....sounds like a grey sky day.....:)

Thanks for sharing this poem.....sitting here alone....no place to go......

sipping coffee and smoking a cigarette.....sounds kinda like a chilled afternoon in some ways...:)

Feel free to stop by and check out one of my poems...

BB73

[a_methyste]

Thank you for the feedback. I appreciate it.