WOULD YOU STILL LOVE ME WHEN?

WOULD YOU STILL LOVE ME WHEN ?  
                         
                          I have no make up on

                           I have bed head

                             I 'm sick

                             I'm grumpy

                             I'm moody

                             My body changes
                        
                            I'm old with gray hair

                            I 'm wrinkley

                                       

Reviews

[GTVile]

Someone that says "no" to any of these questions obviously doesn't love the narrator. These are all inevitabilities that we all will face. Anyone not willing to endure it with the other should just walk away to begin with. These are just among the many difficulties that we all have to deal with. Many just simply can't handle it but recklessly engage in the relationship anyway. Oh well. Good job.

[Coyote Poetry]

A very nice poem. The problem when the girl get older so does the boy. Must grow wiser and expand love to more and complete emotion. Your poem ask a very good question. Time is the test of love. A excellent poem.
Coyote

[Buddhistboy73]

ok, so I love the sentiment behind this one..:)
And a great question to ask too....but I'm sure the right person would...
a couple of little grammatical errors here, but nothing major......easy to fix.
Good write, and I look forward to reading more of your words....

[aaron]

ya thanks very much

[~eVelyN fAiTh~]

I like this poem because it expresses how relationships shouldn't be so suprerficial and based on the physical aspects of the people in them

[aaron]

thanks

[Flo_writer]

I as myself these questions a lot whenever I'm in a relationship with someone. I would like to think I'm not so shallow. It is a conundrum...well to me anywayz. It's honest and fragile...overall relatable and sensitive. I like it.

[aaron]

thanx

[chaotic katie]

kool

[xHaraMusicloverx]

This is really cool!
Simple and Honest! ^^