Freedom

Freedom, or something else?

I make you feel,

Awake and real,

I can not take,

What is at stake,

It’s just too much for me to see,

The world of possibility,

I just fall back and listen,

To the water glisten,

I hear your voice,

Calling me,

I know the choice,

That will set me free,

But I choose you,

Each day anew,

Over the thought,

That I could be brought,

My freedom.

Author's Note

I'm a young writer, so any advice is helpful.