Lies

A Poem by Becky

Lies, they shatter dreams
They don't care about my feelings
Lies do not have hearts,
so they do not care when others fall
Apart.

© 2009 Becky

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Jaeda

I think this is an important (if not first) realization to anyone, and no matter how long you think about it, lies will always hurt you. Good poem.

Posted 16 Years Ago

Butterflymom

This is honest, raw, and very well done.

Posted 16 Years Ago

ICE	This was short and to the point. I loved it! It flowed quite nicely. Lies have a tendency to just destroy everything... Posted 16 Years Ago This was short and to the point. I loved it! It flowed quite nicely. Lies have a tendency to just destroy everything... Rating /100

Alyssa

I like this, its very short and sweet.
Its very clear with what the message says.
I like the flow, very nice :)

Posted 16 Years Ago

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Added on April 23, 2009

Author

Becky

New Durham, NH

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I am a young woman. I recently got married and we bought our first house. We are expecting our first child in November. I started writting poetry when I was in 8th Grade. more..