A Celebration In Black

Valentine's Day 2007 my second valentine without her by my side. i still celebrate Valentine in black!

A Celebration In Black

 

its been two years
and i celebrate in black
the oath is fulfilled...
now i'm back in black!
the legend of fire...
and the fury of its atack
a lone warrior... had i held it back!
and again, i celebrate in black

judge not her soul
by the abyss of her eyes
for i see them in the moon
a road to eternity...
a stairway to her room
its nbeen two years now...
and i'm keeping my oath...
for i'll see her soon!
whenever the time is right...
she'll call my tune...
a departure in the ides of june!
a reserection of love
the triumph of glory...
in the beauty of the rain...
hiding out the tears...
caused by my pain!
its been two years now...
my soldier of fortune...
has broken through the chain...
i've celebrated my love in black...
as i've been walking in the rain!

half of my oath is done..
with no more love to strain...
the day has come to an end...
the sun has set...
apon the semetary of my heart...
as we all walk in the funeral of venus...
in my tomb of roses...
in my heart... i lay...
the coffin of our love...
on valentine's day!

by: The Black Iris, Of The Luminous Imperious

 

Reviews

[TamerQtaish]

Damn bro!
This is a hell of a poem, you truly mastered it with words and soul!
2 years for you 6 for me, I am older :P just kidding bro, its never counted in years but experiences

Back to your magical poem here that lays!
I solute you

Love and respect,
Tamer

[Chloe..Across the Unive..]

This is one good poem.. really like the flow and the word choice ,, of course back in black is a great song too lol .. but seriously, this is very good.. i am not a great critique of poetry i can say if i like it or not and if it touches me .. this one i like and it touched me ..

Chloe
xoxo