She's my dreams

I see her face; it's full of grace
My heart's afire; it's one desire
Is to know her; this pretty larkspur;
And then retire to her bonfire.

I know it's pure, you know I'm sure.
Then why this hate in your astute gait?
Just help me get, and not regret,
What's not too late; 'Tis my fate.

Pushing and turning, this busy morning,
I wondered where I'd catch her stare;
I looked around and then I found
She wasn't there; it wasn't fair.

In love's race she set ablaze
My mind with dreams and golden schemes.
In this realm with me at the helm
She's the queen, or so it seems!
She's my heme; she's my dreams.

Reviews

[ScarlettTheDreamer]

Nice. Yeah i say nice a lot. Anyways, great writing!

[sayandeep kundu]

wow.. terrific piece of work...culminated in something strikingly passionate...loved it bro.. :)

[J.Black]

Great, and great! Rhyming scheme seemed to flow and fit. I really like the change in font and format for the 2nd stanza. It's almost like this is the most important one of them all- and it is. Great imagery. I am a fan of you!

[Ruth]

This is lovely
A really good flow
xx

[KatiePie]

Wow, so beautiful again. I love your work, your so talented! :)
-Cathrine

[R E Tree]

This is very creative it has a deep romantic tone and I like that. I like how most of the words rhyme and I have noticed a stanza in a gray colour that does not stand out among the rest of the stanza's but I have read it and seems the best stanza in the poem.

[deeps]

This is a very well written write. I like this alot.
Such a wonderful flow and amazing rhyme scheme.
Well written!