A Sigh

For every furtive sigh that never leaves my aching soul,
There grows a lump inside my throat that makes me think of you
And soothes the cinders of my mind emblazoned with your name,
Despite the pain of knowing I might never be with you.

Author's Note

Reviews

[FlawedByDesign]

A sigh is all that came out of me after I read this. It was a longing sigh for sure, one telling of the pain you speak off. Truly a mesmerizing write, as short as it is, in conveying the sentiments of anguish.
"knowing I might never be with you" - produces such a lump inside my throat and having to swallow it, kind of hurts.

Awesome write.

[Gleb Zavlanov]

Wow! Short and simple and flawless in every way. If I was to quote the best lines, I would quote everything. Thank you for sharing.

[Abdul Aziz]

Thank you very much!

[Gleb Zavlanov]

My pleasure.

[AK]

Very nice! It is nice to see that you can capture the emotions of your readers with merely six lines..

[nemesis]

LOVELY!!

[Hayley]

"And soothes the cinders of my mind emblazoned with your name".
Wonderful!

[Neva Flores Smith - Cha..]

Beautiful, absolutely beautiful!

[Tate Morgan]

Damn I came back to read this again it is damn good !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

[Tate Morgan]

Now that is good .I like it very much

[Dinesh Sairam]

It's mystic how these surreal memories appear between the blank stares. Pain portrayed simply. :) Keep writing.