Never Bid Me Goodbye

For a special person

Never Bid Me Goodbye

Jamboree, jamboree! Jet black eyes,
Uncautelous flame that's raging on!
Vanilla canopied surprise,
End my vacillatory song.
Requite my faith and do reprise
Illacerable symphonies long;
And keep me close, I'll sing along.

You set emotions prancing by
Atop the wings of fireflies
Surreptitiously glancing by;
Egret under azure skies,
Eclogue, thou with dancing eyes
Never bid me that painful last goodbye.

Reviews

[Tate Morgan]

I LL TAKE WHATEVER YOU ARE HAVING tHAT SOUNDS BEAUTIFUL TO ME

[Divinity Sleeps in This]

Cute, your words dance on the page like a surgeon stiching an operation that went exceedingly well!

[Hayley]

You sure test my vocabulary!
I think this poem is very unique. I like your word choice, such as "vanilla canopied sunrise" compared with the "azure skies." The rhythm of this poem does not skip a beat, and each line was so well penned. It's a very distinct piece. Well done!!

[Dinesh Sairam]

* Villainous laugh*

[Michael X]

to catch a gaze then offer the requip, I could see into the passionate
eyes of the muse as I read your words, when such wonder abounds,
as to render the heart when hypnotized, this is remarkable work,
it's a reflection of the spellbound poet ^_^