Psalms Twenty 3

a parody

The lord is my shepherd
that's all i want

He makes me lie down in green pastures
Besides me are my pleasures

He leads me beside still waters
I drank till i was drunk

He restores my soul
Now am immortal

He leads me in the path of righteousness
Sorry b*****s am not available

Even though i walk through the valley of shadow of Death
I have my own shadow who's fearless

Armed with a rod and a staff
am comforted.

You prepare a table for me
Filled with the desires of my tummy

In the presence of my enemies
Watching them starve

You anoint my head with oil
And it shines like gold

My cups run over
One wonders if was wine 

Surely goodness and mercy 
shall pursue me

All the days of my life
Till i come and dine in your House

Forever and ever 
And till everest more

Amen.

Reviews

[unsavable_soul]

This is so creative,
I really like this piece, you make something familiar to all very much your own. This shows very strong creative skills, the write itself was just as interesting though I think there may be a couple of grammar issues. As a whole this is very very, nice. Keep this unique writing coming Dicey, hit me with some read requests, I like to make sure I get around to all my friends but get easily distracted.
Sincerely
Christopher

[dicey jones]

thanks cris

[unsavable_soul]

Not a problem friend.
Chris

[deaths calling]

verry good writing

[dicey jones]

Thanks...

[deaths calling]

your welcome