The Blue Icicle

Never pretend what you want to show...but pretend what you truly feel......

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The Blue Icicle
                   -By Gamitsuki
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In the summery caves of warmness,
Somewhere deep a icy blue icicle has grown,
Not in a millennium but in a timeless moment,
Given an unbearable painful echoing tone.


Tears drop by drop falling from the tip,
Into the depths of nothingness sip by sip,
The icicle grows to the endless end as it weep.

Author's Note

I hope you EnjoY...... ::--))

Reviews

[Julia.Moore]

The love for haiku poetry was sparked during world literature studies, drawn to its ability to convey profound ideas in just a few syllables. Over the years, hundreds of haikus were written, inspired by moments of awe in everyday life, many of which are featured in the book Blue Harlequin. These haikus aim to inspire an appreciation for the simple beauty in life’s fleeting moments. Read the full article to delve deeper into the beauty of haiku poetry: https://aoidemagazine.com/what-is-haiku-poetry/

[SmittyJas]

Nice Cavern Poem I been to the Cavern tours Nice to have visited cold down deep in the earth.

[Gamitsuki]

really smittyJas......i am sure that must have been so fun......thank you for your review.....i hope you enjoyed...

[M]

It's beautiful but it's too short :).. "Not in a millennium but in a moment timeless" I think there is a grammatical mistake here it should be " not a millennium but in a timeless moment' ... I love it too :)

[Gamitsuki]

thank you very much...and you are right......thanks for correcting me.....n sorry...'cause it's short...i am currently working on a long poem....so please wait for it.....again i appreciate it very much....