Writer's Block

Too tired to write,

A riot of words in my mind.

Frustrated and contrite,

I really need to unwind.

Reviews

[LeeLee Ryder]

Your poem WB quickly illustrates that words attempt a coup d'état in your brain
but can't escape ... waiting for the chance to get out and leap onto paper...
And when you unwind they will definitely fly out without frustration or regret.
Bullet point & sharp poetry, you bet... Good job, C
LLR

[Jeremy Baker]

Ah, my nemesis ... I know the feeling!

[Calypso]

This makes me think of two things. First this reminds me of an essay my friend wrote for English 101. She compared writer's block to a fetal wound. Second this reminds me that I haven't wrote anything creative since I started college. Right now I believe it would be a miracle if I wrote something creative.

[HeIsWe]

So true, awesome!!!!!!!!!!!

[stars are far]

Vey nice rhyme :)

[SoulCrusader (Yas)]

Very true and perfect poem!!!

[Dahlia Phoenix]

Even though it was short, it had a flow to it till the very end. The rhyme scheme is good and yes, when we try to find ideas to write something; writer's block isn't helpful. When too tired, our minds can't concentrate. Fascinating is all I can say for this poem.

[Coyote Poetry]

Last line is true. Sometime need to to step away and rewind thoughts and ideas. I enjoyed this short poem. A outstanding poem.
Coyote