Barbarity

Dragon comments and graphics

A bandit and barbarian with wordy weapons,

Ruthless sabotages in hideous forms,

Crouching and lurking in the darkest shadows,

Bestial and damaging other soul,

Ravaging good and purity in its' path.

It swallowed its' consciousness in an unfaithful course,

Arsenic injecting savage in sexual and abusive rebellion,

Invidious remnants in mourning.

Reviews

[brenda]

thats harsh! really good imagery !

[Bubo]

There are so many survivors of abuse, and here is your stark, painful and very angry work, what you need to find is peace, because while you review other's for their words in such a hurtful fashion, you are becoming the abuser, and that means those who hurt you have won, turned you from a gentle being to one with misdirected anger.
Please reconsider how you review.

[disconnectedspirit]

had some nut leaving comments I had to delete quickly

[disconnectedspirit]

oh shoot...NO..I did not mean to delete the spoken words one my apologies

[disconnectedspirit]

I am a survivor of abuse

[disconnectedspirit]

the sensuality, you said format not the words right? because the sexual rebellion was not sensual, he was masturbating on the computer with a woman who tried to ruin my life as he told me loved me, and they were abusing me together..so want to make sure you know it was not a sensual experience..my profile will outline it better

[disconnectedspirit]

thanks